Friday, February 5, 2010

"The Rusty Ruins"

They get to the Rusty Ruins and Tally is in aw of the city.Shay says she wants to show Tally the roller coaster. they hover board on the whole roller coaster till Tally goes over a broken piece and fall down the slope. Luckily there was a piece so her hover board would work and she lived.Shaw wanted her to see one more thing, as a matter of fact one person.....

page 66

"But her brain stayed as clear as it had those seconds of free fall, and she found herself wondering who had found the roller coaster first, and how many other uglies had come here since."Shay, who showed you all this?"

page 65

"Tally clenched her fists, waiting for the crash bracelets to kick in and haul her up by her wrists. But they had become as useless as the board, just heavy strips of steel dragging her to the ground."

2 comments:

  1. Your blog looks fantastic Baylor! Sadly though, these two quotes are not similes. remember, just because the sentence has like or as in it doesn't make it a simile. In order to be a simile it must use "like or as" comparing two different things.

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  2. Your blog inspired me to put music on mine too!

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